Monday, September 15, 2008

तुझे देखना चाहता हूँ



चांदनी रात है,
मंद-मंद हवा बह रही है|
बालकनी में बैठा हूँ,
फूलों की खुशबू मुझे मोह रही है||

तन्हा हूँ, कोई साथ नहीं,
दूर है तू मेरे पास नहीं|
रात काफ़ी हो चुकी है, पर आंखों में नींद नहीं,
अब तुझे देखना चाहता हूँ, तेरी तस्वीर नहीं||

थक गया हूँ तेरे बारे में सोचते-सोचते,
इकरार के बाद अब इंतज़ार नहीं होता|
दौड़कर पहुँच जाता तेरे पास,
काश! काश कि मैं इतना मजबूर नहीं होता||

कब आख़िर कब ख़त्म होगी यह विरह,
कब हमारा मिलन होगा|
कब होगी तू मेरे सामने,
और कब मुझे तेरा दीदार होगा||

उस पल में मैं अपनी सारी ज़िन्दगी जी लेना चाहता हूँ,
ख्वाबों में बहुत सुन चुका हूँ, अब तुझे सुनना चाहता हूँ|
तेरी तस्वीर बहुत देख चुका हूँ, अब तुझे देखना चाहता हूँ||

17 comments:

Navankur said...

@ mabbo
Tujhe dekhna chahta hoon......

Gud attempt ....but ab mujhe lag raha hai iin poems ke liye ye blog inspiration nahin hoo sakta ...

Koi to hai jara hume bhi to bataoo jisse tasviir se nikaal kar dekhna chate hoo

Nikunj Jain said...

Woww mabboo ..... awsomee poem yaarr ... :)
Tu to bahut aacha poet nikla reeyy...

btw aapna 4th poet kaha haii ..

Nikunj Jain said...

@ navankur ... i agree wid nav... koi to haii..
aab bata de jaldi se warna yaha pe sawal poochne walo ki line lag jayegii :P

Unknown said...

kisi inspiration ki zarurat nahi.......bas chandni raat mein balcony mein khade ho jaao.......inspiration apne aap mil jayegi....khaaskar tab jab saamne ATM gate ho

Nikunj Jain said...

@ mabbao ..
Sahi hai betaa....tab to daily insprtns chnge hoti hongii ... :)

Unknown said...

hehehehehe.........yup tera room bhi agar ATM gate side hota to aaj tu bhi aisi poetry kar raha hota

Navankur said...

@ mabbo

dekho bhai mai bhi thoda bahut likh leta hn ...but ATM and poetry ka koi relation nahin .......but ATM par chandni raat mai kaun hota hai yahi to poonch rahe hai .......ab to tune bhi mana ke koi inspiration to hai ...

Cookie said...

kaun hai bhai....

simmy said...

well ..good1 mabbo .. i hope she also appreciates this effort of urs as much as we did ...so keep it up !!!

silence said...

few lines frm ma side..(juss oposite to ur thoughts but stil smthng z common)

Tu kuch bhi soach
Teri ya apni khushi ke liye tujhse door rahe,
ab is se badkar bewafa-a-saza kya hogi,ki tere hokar bhi tujhse dur rahe,
tujhe dekhna to chhahte the hamesha apne aas pass,kaun janta hai hum bewafai wafa se karte karte apni jindagi se kitne door rahe.........

Anonymous said...

suberb poem
bahut saari ladhkiya impress hone wali hai

Unknown said...

hey silence......
nice lines yaar
n ya for all the gals who liked this poem......chandni raat mein ATM par milna...u'll definitely find me standing in my balcony.......bcoz main tujhe dekhna chahta hun aur han pariyaan to chandni raat mein hi ghoomne nikalti hain......watz say pari

Nikunj Jain said...

@ Silence.. nice lines yaar ...

@ maboo .... superb yaarr, matlab aab raat main tere room ki balcony main jyada tym spent karna hogaa .... aab pariya aayengi to tu aakele kaisai manage karega.... :D

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simmy said...

@ silence are these your lines .....
superb ....good 1 really !!

silence said...

@mabb n nike
thnxxxx :):)
@simmy
thnxxx..n ya lines r written by me but inspired frm sm1s sher or shayari ...ehehe

Anonymous said...

beautiful...bahut acha likha hai..

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