what is love
do any answers you have
can it be defined in words
or it only live in hearts
with it every thing is alive
without it there is nothing to live
with it you can fly
without it you cant even die
with it life seems so beautiful
without it there is nothing meaningful
with it there is fragnance everywhere
without it there is nothing you want to hear
with it you have an inspiration
without it there is only depression
with it time goes so rapid
without it it's all vapid
love is wrong everyone fight
if loving you is wrong I dont want to be right
so what is love what do you think
this is the song which everyone want to sing
love is a desert where even ice dont melt
it cant be described it can only be felt.
7 comments:
nice poem "What is love"......but how do u know that......or is there something we dont know?????
@ gomes .... nice poem yaar..
Well a few lines frm my syd...
whn u wat to live in the eyes of som1 i.e. Love
whn u wat to die in the arms of som1 i.e. Love
whn u feel some1 widout her presence i.e. Love
Love is which make u do crazy things
i totally dnt agree with "lov is desert which cant melt"....... because tears in luv with its warmth nd emotions can melt nything!!!! nd can u please explain wats d relation between fragrance of luv and our hearing power!!!! LOL.......
nyways if we neglect sum of the things, its a wonderful attempt!!!
@ nidhi
it like when u lost in the fragnance of luv so much that u dont able to see hear etc.
i think this will justify my lines
@mabbo
the thing that u dont is that i m a poet lol:)
@ gomes .... really a good one ..dude .. all those who have fallen in love will definately agree with you .....
but ya good1 ...good going !!!
nthng new..
old stuff in new package..
but still...i'll not say nethng like dis
cos i juss luvd d poem:):):)
dere z nthg whthr its rlnshp,luv,commitment or ne dammn thng widout feelings!!!!
so i think ur poem z vry gud xpression f luv in its simlest form
gud attempt:):):)
@silence
thanxxx
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